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Click hereSunday Anne spent the whole day nude and by the pool. Lou came over about eleven AM and stayed with the couple for the day. Anne's pussy was on display for the two men to ogle all day. She loved how it made her feel when the two men had their eyes on her. As they took in her naked beauty, she could see their admiration for her in their eyes.
It was about four PM that the phone rang. It was Mark he wanted to verify that Anne did not change her mind and he told her to wear a dress without under garments when she comes to their studio tomorrow.
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just another wimpy husband story - 1* - are there no authors out there that can write a story where the husband has a set of balls????
I enjoyed the story but the shifting tenses is distracting and cheapens the whole thing. You don’t need to occasionally sift into the present tense. It doesn’t help and makes the story worse.
It's not just the spelling - it's mis-punctuation, shifting tenses, & stilted language. Try using an editor, then pay attention & learn from what he/she suggests. Upgraded to 2 for the effort
...if English is not your native language as it obviously isn't yours. However you do need to get the grammar and spelling right. Perhaps a grammar and spelling app would help? The story is potentially very good but the way it is told let you down badly.