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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Terrible! Badly in need of an editor (or better still the 'Erase' button). At least run it through a spell-checker. A pity 1* is the lowest. It deserves zero,

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Hi and thanks for checking in here. I'm new as a writer but appreciate both reading good stories as well as recieving feedback on mine. My stories will include stuffs that are taboo and wrong and the characters might have weird values, it's important to seperate fantasy from r...