All Comments on 'The Mechanic's Slut Wife Pt. 01'

Sometimes you ca get burned playing games!

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Good start. I hope we won't have to wait too long for the sequel.

Just another slut

Why doesn’t she just become a prostitute. She’ll be in control and earn far more than $30 an hour.

After all she’s selling her body to her employer.

Oh wow. Another woman blowing up her own life for some sex. Crazy

Jury is still, but seeing I am NOT a fan of cuck stories, I hope part 2 has Mark getting his revenge...

DOL

1/2 a story

Jury is still out, looking like another pathetic cuckyboy story but maybe this writer has some testicular fortitude....

Hold of on rating it for now but so far its not looking good.

More of the same old same old cuck crap, nothing new, usual effortless, closeted gay male attempt at pulling the closet queens in.

Can't figure out why writers insist on wife characters who are so deluded. You cannot love your husband and be a cheating slut. It is impossible since love is a commitment not a warm fuzzy feeling. Love is action not emotion. She loves how Mark makes her feel. She loves herself and her passions. She does not love him. Cam should meet the end of Mark's baseball bat ASAP. Any other ending for this degenerate is wrong. Following said beating, Mark must kick this whore to the curb immediately and publicly. Serious humiliation is in order.

I sincerely hope the bitch gets hers in spades and that she is really hurt.

What a conniving bitch

No wimps here please. No willing cucks.

So the jury is out on your story, no score yet.

Great start, looking forward to some dirty talk off Anne as she is used by Cam.

I like the story so far. Nice build up to whatever is next!

Another writer dreaming about giving away their wife. Why are all these husbands in these stories so dumb. The wives are all mentally ill and husbands are all dumb can some one actually write about a wife with brains and a husband who isn't dumb.

Well... nice buildup. Let’s see what you do, with part 2. 4 stars, at this point.

Old whores aren’t too bright, just screwed.

OK, we know what Cam's plan is, but we need to find out how Mark plans to kill him. Right off the bat , she should have told Mark, but not telling him was surprsing since she was about to break the fidelity between them, supposedly strong, but obviously not. I suggest as twist to this standard; surprise us. Keep writing.

XYZ

So many slut-ray stories. You write drivel quite well.