All Comments on 'The Meeting'

by Trayliciouz

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Ram2016Ram2016about 8 years ago

You might just want to correct your grammar.its a bit hard to follow through the story. But overall good job!

Lurid1Lurid1almost 12 years ago
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Great first effort!

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