All Comments on 'The Meeting'

I saw you were following me and so I viewed your profile and the story. I enjoyed it. But I will warn you that the "critics" can be cruel on this site.

I write stories as well. This was amazing. My first stories were not this good. I have written one story with asian trans women it was well received. My only advice is more detail could enhance the story. Thickly veined, smoothly shaven, hazel eyes, muscular calves for example. Not critical just my opinion. A solid 5. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Especially if this is your first posting? Erotic, well crafted, damn good. PLEASE KEEP WRITING

You said "I didn't want to interpret her" I think you meant interrupt her