All Comments on 'The Meeting'

by AMATIVEDRAGON

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good story line

Terrible editing. If you were to fix the grammatical errors and maybe ditch his hands here, then there, then here again, it would be really good.

-amebede

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