All Comments on 'The Minotaur and the Virgin'

Gee. I think that's very very good... That's very well written. IMO.

Is this a stand alone or the start if a series? I hope it is the start of a series.

Side note. Would this country be aware of Christ? Or would Hera be a more fitting exultation? Good minotaur, nice deflowering.

Very good!!!!

Is there more,,it seems like this would just be the first page,,it needs more to finish it,,,,kinda left hanging,,,,,good start,,but lacking in an ending..

I admitted at least leaves room for imagination to fill in the rest. I realize you stopped at the easy part. The deflowering was obvious and going to happen. What happened afterwards? She was afraid she would be lunch. If she didn't end up as lunch what happened. Did he impregnate her? Since he got a new virgin every month if he didn't consume them what happened to them? So many questions left unanswered. That's why I only gave it an average.