All Comments on 'The Missing Bride Pt. 02'

I had to reread Part 1, since it's been a year. I see you listened to the comments (something rare, but not unheard of, on Lit), and Part 2 is definitely better! It could have been even better if you had described how Cory tried to find her and rescue her, and ultimately (apparently) failed. He knew she was meeting Homberto which was a huge clue! Did Kimberly help provide cover?

I can see why Kelley came to look forward to the sex; if I were chained, naked, in a dark basement with nothing to do all day, then the sex would be the only break in the monotony! Of course, you don't mention it, but I'm sure from time to time she felt the need to eat, and to urinate and defecate? There was the detail of the bucket and paper towels, and kudos for that, although I think that was only in Part 1. Personally, I can't imagine it, but I guess there are women who blow a cock right after it's been up her ass, although I'd imagine it's not common! The world is a big place, and contains all sorts of people, after all. 5* ~~ JBE

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