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by vanalas

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Bham487Bham487about 1 month ago

At least give it an ending. This is ridiculous.

SorblesuSorblesuabout 1 month ago

Hoping for a part 2. They need their happily ever after. Can’t end like this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Vanalas, I was happy to find this new story. I know we will yearn for a continuation at least I'm yearning. Looking forward to a second part. You are a great writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Already drawn into this story

Wonderful work canals, hope for a continuation

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I cried

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Vanalas I thoroughly enjoyed The Mistress, truth be told you are an excellent writer. Was that the end or you will bless us with part 2?

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I have been successful probably because I have always realized that I knew nothing about writing and have merely tried to tell an interesting story entertainingly. My own experience is that once a story has been written, one has to cross out the beginning and the end. It is th...