All Comments on 'The Mistress Ball Pt. 01'

Nice first entry. Some spelling/usage errors proofreading will take care of on your next chapter/story.

Thanks, I gotta admit. It wasn't my best subject at school. Ha ha.

In the excitement of finally writing something I kinda rushes to get it submitted too. So hopefully improvements to come.

Great story. When will part 2 be published?

Hi all. Part to is in the making as are a few other stories. I didn't actually want to publish part one when I did. But after having a few laptop problems had to go ahead.

Hope the wait is worth it.

I reread your story for the xth time. I still hope there will be a part 2!

Hey guys. Very sorry, life had kinda got in way a bit. I have the beginning of part two saved in my drafts. Guess I'd better get cracking.

Loved this story so makes me want to be that guy. Cant wait for part 2.