All Comments on 'The Modified Slave Ch. 05'

5 stars of top shelf entertainment and sexual adventures. Love that the sexual exploits may be extreme and dark. That makes it hot. Rock on with Blues control and designs for Red. The more it gets wild the better. Cheers

Pathetic... what a loser for a story concept to carry the brutality to this point. Just wrong........ What a sicko concept........... All I could think about was what idiot to think this erotica.

This is edgeplay... I have the equipment (though not the furniture) to do it on a Tuesday morning if I wanted to. It's not even close to being as brutal as it's going to get. I will try to make the warnings more precise, though.

I found this addition to be quite erotic. I don't know how more descriptive you can make your warnings.

I can't wait to see where you take these characters.

"None of them would dream of giving me free reign over their bodies the way I knew Red would.... I wanted to ruin her life, but I also wanted to make her a cohesive work of art."

You make me shiver...

The best series of this kind I read until now.

Don't stop i love this story.

This is a delicious story. But it takes so long between such short chapters, it demands patience...as it should.

I really hope you will continue with this story. It has so much potential, and I would love to see Red's descent into her ruination.

Please give us something more soon! :)

Great story. Hope you add to it.