All Comments on 'The Mommy Slut Ch. 02'

Chapters are too short. Two pages would be better if not three. It feels like I'm just getting into it & it's over. The story & writing is excellent.

forget about writing about mother / son.......... just plain assine, now sister would be better, mom's are just plain lame to write about for sex.

I like your writing style, but I agree with the prior comment about lengthening the chapters. I'm also not looking forward to any son/uncle involvement, but your kink is your own.

Sorry, but the second you hinted at the uncle sucking the mc's cock, I thought, "I'm out!"

Interesting story. AAAA++++

Well. I like it. Yes, the chapters are short, but getting better. Good story so far. And you DID forewarn us they are short at the start. Not real into uncle nephew stuff unless one or the other is cd/Trans or something, but again, we were warned, and some are into that. It won't turn me off or anything. I like your style of writing. So let all the negative comments roll off your back like water. Keep up the good work

I AM NOT interested in MC getting his uncle involved, except with mom & videos...guy sex is not for me. That said, I will skip that if you print it...

Overall, the stories get better and better...chapters are short, yet full of info...and nasty!

Five Stars!

Getting there

5/5

fucking gr8 so far