All Comments on 'The Mommy Slut Ch. 08'

Your story (saga?) is good. However, you need to let the characters make LOVE sometimes. Not just wham bam thank you mam. Better description(s) would be welcomed at times. Not necessarily all the time but interspersed throughout the "wham bams".

Looking forward to ensuing chapters. Thank you.

Good story. You might want to put a list of characters at the beginning since there are a bunch.

I love your story can't wait for mor

I have enjoyed the series so far and I look forward to reading morem