All Comments on 'The Monster Pt. 24'

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TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthorover 1 year ago

Fucking hot. Short...but hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loving this series, keep up the amazing job.

Just wish they were a little longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Get over yourself and end this ridiculous story. You can write better than this, without relying on a total heap of bullshit and a harem to make repetitive, overly long sex scenes that could never, ever actually happen seem interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I appreciate that this story was not forgotten and was finally updated with a new chapter. Great work as always and definitely worth the wait

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticover 1 year ago

I'm glad the story keeps being updated.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Can’t be doin this 2 months til next chapter stuff. Need more this is too good

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is the best series on this site. You certainly know how to seduce the reader. In a way you are like Jack. I keep wanting more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story. I like the story a lot. Can't wait to see what will happen in chapter 25

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Man when are they going to lose the thoughts of pills and just let him cum in side!!

DarkAngelJLDarkAngelJLover 1 year ago

Definitely worth the wait. Awesome.

Liam73Liam73over 1 year ago

What. Only 28 chapters and this is still bullshit

Bronco56Bronco56over 1 year ago

Excellent series. I hope you don't wait to long to continue 5stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

@Liam73 nice to see you again complaining that it's still the same when we had several hot scenes. An actual sex scene and foreshadowed a shower scene.

I'm curious if you serious or u simply like getting people riled up

bucco40bucco40over 1 year ago

About time. Now after taking mom in the shower again, grab Aunt Rita, take her to Sara's room and fuck her in front of Sara. Then go with Clara to Jo's room and demand she cleans his cock of Auntie's juices.

DocWordsDocWordsover 1 year ago

And the plot thickens. Great story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Can't wait until the boy impregnates all of them

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

All I can say is Wow! I think this story broke the server.... I hope you realize this story is far from over, matter of fact it just took full traction, to end many, many decades later, in their lives.

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fabulous story! Can't wait to read what happens next! 10 Stars!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Things are getting good.

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