All Comments on 'The Monster Pt. 26'

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lantern04lantern04over 1 year ago

I hope there's even more to this story. Perhaps some pregnancies?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

only 16"? What a wimp. Why can't you write a story about a guy with a real man's cock? You know, 30" long, 3 feet in circumference, a real hog that can tear a cunt up properly. What's with all these betas? Just ridiculous to think any guy wouldn't have at least 18", at a bare minimum, hanging between his legs. Ludicrous.

svfd1723svfd1723over 1 year ago

Great story. Please don’t wait so long to to post the next

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticover 1 year ago

Another great chapter. I loved it. One guy's female relative/s becoming his girlfriend is a huge turn-on for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story. Jack needs to bring his teacher in to him harem and maybe his sister's best friend Rose. Can't wait to see what chapter 27 will be about

Fastcar88Fastcar88over 1 year ago

Love the whole story chain. Big tits, sexy moms and daughters, and enthusiastic facials. Keep up the great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

My 2 cents

More please. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

WOW!!! One of the best stories I've ever read!!!!

Had me hanging all the way through!

Thank you!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This makes me sorry I’m an only child.

sunlover1sunlover1over 1 year ago

Surely one of the, if not the best, stories I have ever read. The reader can easily identify with the characters you have crafted. You are certainly a very gifted author and have a very fertile imagination. I sincerely hope that you have further episodes in the works. Congratulations and very best regards.

rjr_1954rjr_1954over 1 year ago

Ohhh! This is the best story I have read in a long time!

I know its time consuming to write, but please continue with tis amazing story

CbPatrick64CbPatrick64over 1 year ago

Totally into this story. Would love to read more.

SniperkingSniperkingabout 1 year ago

Does Jo actually like him or is it just his dick? back in part 3 she said the only thing that made him special was his dick but does she still just see him as that

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I’ve been interested in this Jo thing up until now. I knew he would end up fucking the, all in the end anyway. But he could at least find some way to show he loves her as more than a sex toy. Mention she’s the only one he’s cum in. Tell her that if she does a good job she will be second in command of the harem. Or just tell his harem he’s going on a date with her to make her feel special. Something to get her feeling better about herself.

midatlstorymanmidatlstoryman4 months ago

Appears he was on the right track when he said not even his family members cared if he was alive or dead until they found out about his package. Tell them they can come or go, he doesn't care. Including Jo, maybe especially, since she was the worse one. Looking forward to seeing how his domination plays out

kdeville87kdeville873 months ago

dam, it's getting hot. The Alpha in Jack is finally coming out

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