by AmberSolis
Oh for fuck sake. I can't read this. I'm doing my best to not blow up. This is... Jesus chrust.
Dialogue feels overly verbose at times and actions are really drawn out or over explained.
Definetly have no idea what's going on at the end of this story........ Well written, just not enough information in the end for a clueless male like me.
Please continue this story. The character development is off to a great start and there is so many opportunities for continuing development and stories. Thank you.
AmberSolis, I love the characters in “The more things change”. Please continue this story. The possibilities are endless as the three main characters move forward with Michelle as the fourth character. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thank you.