All Comments on 'The More Things Change ...'

by AmberSolis

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AngelRiderAngelRiderover 1 year ago

Oh for fuck sake. I can't read this. I'm doing my best to not blow up. This is... Jesus chrust.

FortyninemikeFortyninemikeover 1 year ago

My the twists in this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Dialogue feels overly verbose at times and actions are really drawn out or over explained.

David_BrockDavid_Brockover 1 year ago

Definetly have no idea what's going on at the end of this story........ Well written, just not enough information in the end for a clueless male like me.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Please continue this story. The character development is off to a great start and there is so many opportunities for continuing development and stories. Thank you.

curiouspj1962curiouspj19626 months ago

AmberSolis, I love the characters in “The more things change”. Please continue this story. The possibilities are endless as the three main characters move forward with Michelle as the fourth character. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thank you.

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I'm a woman who has been around the block more than a few times. I write mostly light-hearted stuff usually centered around lesbians, mutual-consent incest between adults, group sex. I do write some darker, non-consent stories, but even those usually end happily. My stories a...