by janedoe555
Thank you for an update. These two are heating up. They are adorable.
A 20 year age gap is one thing but the way she seems to fetishize it makes it really hot! Is she playing him for the thrill or is it really "love"? Seems to me she's more attracted to him being her daughters age than him. He does read like a stud tho!
Paragraph seven is as good as anything on this site.
You know how to be descriptive and use words to set a scene.