All Comments on 'The Mother of all Events'

Is he the 5th grade or something? How old do you have to be to know the difference between boys and girls?

Poorly written and unorganized. If you like writing, keep doing it, but I would take a writing course.

Thanks for the Comments, guys. You're absolutely right, tallman441, I rushed it a bit and let any chance of quality slide. It was my first story here and I placed too much emphasis on just getting it finished.

While I appreciate the comments on my somewhat hastily written work, tallman441, I couldn't help but notice according to your profile here you have submitted no works at all. All I can say is, and I recognize it's faults, I was brave enough however to submit it. Thank you.