All Comments on 'The Move to the Mountains'

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Buster2UBuster2Uabout 2 years ago

WOW 100 stars what story. Kind of James Bond meets the Punisher! Whoa! Had my doubts at first when cutting tits was done and when hubby willingly was going to let his wife be sacrificed. But killing all the bad guys was great! Too bad he turned his wife into a whore to go under cover. Great Story but now she needs constant strange. Just like my first wife Karen.

rodryder44rodryder44about 2 years ago

Very hard to follow at the end.

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