All Comments on 'The Mysterious Touch Ch. 09'

by RichPastries

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Storytelling

You are a great storyteller, but if it is possible can we have Ty move on from Lisa and do something more like he did in chapters 6 and 7. I don't know I was hoping he would take advantage of his powers at a modeling agency or something like that. I mean he could just tell the people not say anything,right. Also, how about going back to the Cop and/or stewardess, for me those were hot too. AWESOME STORIES, KEEP IT UP

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More?

Is how it ends or are you planning more?

gondaolgondaolabout 8 years ago
End??

Surely, I know don't call you Shirley, you have more in the works!

Imno_TrealImno_Trealabout 8 years ago
Keep them coming!

I like the story line and the writing is well above average.

Keep up the good work and please keep this story going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Huh... nothing new in almost 6 years.

Please, we want more chapters.

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