All Comments on 'The Mystery Box Pt. 01'

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paullanky almost 4 years ago

Wonderful writing I hope there is more to this sensual couple and their new discovery

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Brilliant start to the story

The only negative comment I have and it is minor is that the dialogue between the couple seems quite stilted and formal. Looking for to reading more. The upcoming ‘furniture sale’ should be interesting.

Tess (uk)

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Really old and disgraceful male Dominant, (unrepentent), enjoys most aspects of sexual/perverted interaction between the sexes. Enjoys reading erotica and occasionally creating literature mainly for my own pleasure but also to, (hopefully), provide pleasure for others.

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