All Comments on 'The Natural'

Thank you for your efforts

Very well written, despite the typos. Had me hard, even though I'm not into feet. I hope she makes him worship her feet in public!

Hello KarmaDarma,

Your story was great. Even though I am not specifically into feet, the way you illustrated your heroine's increasing control over her sub was a real turn on!

Loved your mention of universal forces of karma mandating the eventual complete role reversal between men and women. It's delicious to imagine that one day we will all be subs to superior females. I'm surprised it hasn't happend already!

Hope you keep writing!

Then get a decent story line because this one was horse pucky.