All Comments on 'The Naughtiest Doctor'

now that was hot

If only you could do in person what you wrote! I would be your slave!!

I liked the dialogue. Overall, a fun read but here are a few technical points. Hospitals own the surgical scrubs and provide sanitary laundry services. Taking scrubs home is a big no-no. Besides theft, the big reason is contamination with bad pathogens. Home laundry won't cut it for the OR. At a university hospital where I trained, a fellow resident was arrested by the campus police for wearing hospital scrubs as personal gear! No doctor, especially a urologist, would have a home clinic in this day and age. Otherwise, great story! Oh, and watch the verb tenses.

During the upload process I changed the file used for this story and somehow my credit to my edtior went missing (sorry MamaK)... So without further delay...

Thank you to my wonderful editor MamaK. I owe you a great many thanks for your revisions, commentary, suggestions and of course redlines. MamaK you are an amazing editor and I am ecstatic that you continue to help me.

I think this should get a Pulitzer!

This is a great piece of work. Thank you for taking the time to write it.

What a great read that was. Very teasing to read let alone experience. I would be very happy with such a Doctor treating me. Nicely written story. Thank you.

I'd like to make an appointment to see Dr. Benz, please!

What a great story! Thank you for sharing

Most enjoyable. Thank you.

So hot. So, sooo hot. And informed consent all the way through, and aftercare! I couldn't ask for a better femdom story!

Fantastic and crazy hot story. So much potential for these two. Maybe a Chapter 2 - where they start dating each other and develop a wonderful relationship? As much as I love a hot, erotic story - I also love a good romantic love story. This is definitely merging those two lanes into one really fantastic plot line.

This is such a great edging story, the best I've read so far. It certainly kept me on edge as I read it. Relentless edging is my favorite (unfulfilled) fantacy. And a beautiful gentle femdom romance to boot. They both got what they craved, and so did we, your thankful readers. Thanks for sharing your gift.

The expression from the clothes cleaning up part is in vain not in a vain attempt. "In vain" means the attempt is fruitless/is too late to work. In a vain attempt means she is arrogant. I think you meant the former.

Nonetheless, my comment is kind of late so I am afraid my correction may be unnoticed and my attempt to help will have been in vain.

Oh! The copay, you say? Surely there must be a... payment plan that can be arranged?

Excellent work.

Thanks.

Excellent romantic erotica!

5*

Did you mean palpate?

Awesome story!!!! Well done!!!!!

Excellent story. Well written