All Comments on 'The Neighbor'

10 Big Blazing Stars for the Writer Mr Jay Cameron! What a great story of life, Love, Heartaches and surprises! LOL I Most Especially liked the "Surprise Happy Ending"! LOL Another "HallMark Channel" worthy Story. Thanks, Buster2U

3*

Nothing significant at risk for the MC at any point. As a result it was sort of "so what?"

Well written, just not much there there.

Jay, you have me intrigued. There most definitely is another story worth telling. Please do treat us all to it.

All the best,

Dave

It's nice to have a wife who likes pussy and is willing to share. Hope it turns out well for everyone concerned. 5 stars

"When Franklin and Natalie woke the next morning there stood Gianni. Having decided during the night that this latest act of disrespect and humiliation was the last straw, he shoved the butcher knife into Franklin's neck and allowed the bright spray of blood to wash over himself and the cheating slut whose behavior had precipitated this awful situation. With a backward slash of the blade, Gianni drew the blade deeply across the bridge of her nose, destroying her eyes and ensuring the last thing she ever saw was the geyser of blood spurting from the gaping neck wound. Satisfied that his sense of righteous retribution was satisfied, Gianni gathered what he'd need for the next week, closed the door on that chapter of his life and started on the path of a new existence. Where?, he wasn't sure" .

Now that would be a great finish to this giving the author a chance to reclaim some same portion of his manhood