All Comments on 'The Neighbors Ch. 01'

The subject and situation was great, but it was too much like every other group story. It would be easy to liven it up and put some heat in it.

I ENJOYED THE STORY. MORE INVOLVEMENT BETWEEN THE PARTICIPANTS WOULD HAVE GIVEN

MORE SUBSTANCE.

I've read a couple chapters out of order, like them a lot; one note, continuity on names needs to be improved, the names got flopped around incorrectly a few times in these 2 pages. Otherwise, a fun read, will look at the rest soon.