All Comments on 'The New Gazebo'

I am always amazed how some authors can come up with stupid stories. You either like this stuff or truly see woman as just stupid sluts

It was a good story, ... until you started putting the husband down as having a small dick and turning it toward the racist crap at the end.

Did you make even a slight attempt at editing your own work? Is English you ninth language? One star for poorlyu written. One star or less for plot.

There is a lot more to her story than what she is telling.

Get an editor.

There were enough spelling errors in the first two paragraphs to stop me going any further.

Cuck cuck cuck

Cuck alert, cuck alert, cuck alert.... never been my cup of tea, as they say. I hate that men are so wimpy and submissive to a hot slutty wife and her screw around behind his back. But now, with his blessing, he opened the door for her to take on lovers. A sick bastard.... But hey, it only a fiction story but there's nothing exciting here. Just an average tale of infidelity.

Wrong category.

Fetish is that way ——>

5* of stupid

Can't comment on the story. Spelling mistake in the title, wrong use of quiet, and use of wrong tense in second line.

That's as far as I got before I gave up.

What’s a Gazbo? Spelling please? Editors letting another one through!

Editing! You couldn't even bother to get the title right! "Gazbo?"

Poorly written….stupid plot….incoherent.

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Poster child for a 1 * offering.

Not worth the effort

It’s gazebo you ignorant fuck. Just what I’d expect from a cuck author.

Stupid crap

Didn't finish reading. Almost didn't get past tge misspelling in the title, in fact. The writing went downhill from there.

A rambling bunch of crap. Jeez at least try and tie it together with a story line of theme. Utter shit.

I should have read the tags...

My wife enjoys sunbathing in our yard. The next door neighbors have a son who I’ve caught spying on her a few times. I began to ask her why she doesn’t just lay out naked. I told her that with out fence, no one could see her. She started first by going topless. I say Ethan watching her and rubbing his dick in his basketball shorts. Then I finally convinced her to go nude and that first day I saw Ethan actually jerk off while watching her. I can’t wait for summer to get here.

I was so willing her to cum as she was being fingered, her nipples kissed, getting hot regaling her stories AND being watched by Mr Jenkins…mmm… As a female reader, I felt a bit let down.

Nb he was kissing her nipples and fingering her at the same time as slipping his thumb into her ass? Wouldn’t his thumb have been at her clit instead unless he was contorted?

The grammar issues were annoying, but I tried to overlook them. But when it went from a teasing wife to such a cucky situation, you lost me......

Why stay married to somebody that does not respect and love you for what you are! I can guarantee that she is physically not that special, there are thousands of as good or better women out there. There is no reason for him to stick around.

You should learn a new hobby. Knots, for instance. I'd suggest what the Victorians called a "collar," also sometimes called a "running knot."

Shocking

I am sure they have a great relationship other than sex. So, I see nothing wrong with a husband letting his wife find sexual pleasure outside of their marriage as long as it satisfies her sexual needs. My wife has a much higher sexual drive then I do, so we have talked about finding a man that can give her more of what she needs. Hopefully we can find a guy we can trust soon. I really believe it will help our marriage in the long run.

Fucking awful story

1/5

The husband character appears to be submissive cuckold who apparently cannot get the job done at home. He has to rely on other well-hung strangers to fuck his wife then jerks off to hearing all the gory details. Both husband and wife are pond scum...enough said