All Comments on 'The New Headmaster'

Wonderful. There is great promise here.

great start. can't wait for more

Nice start. First of yours I’ve read, because stories focused on transgender are not really my thing, but this one works well and I’m looking forward to the next part. You do need to proof read, though almost all the errors are true Malapropisms, which makes them more fun! You start with “it was foundered”, continued with “a slog of my whiskey”, pity the others were more common typos! Thanks

Not putting "Ch. 1" in the title of a first installment is lying to readers.

Ironic (and rather a pity) that the writer did not graduate from an institution that taught strong spelling, grammar, and writing skills.

Snark aside, good story.