All Comments on 'The New Neighbour Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Do you reply emails?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It's nice to see all your series are under the same universe, which brings more fun to read. This series has nice structure, potentially nice twist, but the ending.... What's Malcolm's scheme as Mills says not to trust him? Why doesn't Mike just swap positions with Mills with his drug?

clantongangclantongangalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Yes - The PM I use on here is not my day to day one, so I only check it periodically, but happy to check and reply

clantongangclantongangalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Re Mike swapping with Mills, you have to remember that Mike didn't want any of this. He was happy living an ordinary life. He is the accidental harem master. By the way Malcolm isn't going to give Mike a supply of the drug, so he can't make any new slaves even if he wanted to (which he doesn't).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Really, well done. a short but great series. Sexy as hell. Thanks, Clanton

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A really great story. It 's plotted well--tight. Thanks for this. I loved it

reopainreopainover 2 years ago

Great story as always, I would to have had one more chapter or maybe a side story where we see Jessica's plan to have Geoff's four slave become Mikes slaves. Mike still his gizmo that enslave women or did Malcom take it. With Jessica's encouragement i sure Mile could be tempted to use it to add four lonely slaves to his unwanted harem (he he he). Anyways great story

clantongangclantongangover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks reopain for the positive feedback. For random reasons of my own I have recently completed a single chapter sequel to this story called "The Good Master", which will answer your question re the harem. As to the other issue, Mike does indeed have the gizmo; what he lacks is the drug - and without the formula he has no means to make any more. To mind-control someone you need both.

mlrsdpicmmlrsdpicmover 2 years ago

would like to see more chapters continuing this story line. the taking of the four harem sisters and what the government has Mike do. And for gods sake please make Mike grow a pair of balls and become a dominant the women need him to be.

clantongangclantongangover 2 years agoAuthor

Hi mlrsdpicm - check out "The Good Master" - I think you will be pleased with Mike's ball-growth!

warshipbuilderwarshipbuilderover 1 year ago

This is my first response to any story. Just wanted to say loved it great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love both stories (The Good Master being the other one. Very well written. I'll be looking for more

clantongangclantongang10 months agoAuthor

Thanks AlexisAlexander - I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

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