All Comments on 'The New Tenant Pt. 01'

You seem to know how to write. You seem to want to make it a semi-professional or even professional occupation.

And you seem to have a cuckold fetish.

No problem, it's your life!

A word of advice, however: a product (yes a story is also a product) is characterized by its target and its location.

You should post your stuff (oops sorry) stories.....in Fetish. Even if it has less visibility, the less you would reach your target and better feedback on the desires and desires of your readers.

Don’t listen to moronic comments. Your story belongs in this category.

Took way too long to say, Kim is going to turn hubby into a sissy wimp cuck with big cocked Toby. No thanks...

5/5 great story

"dipping a toe" and decided to dive right in. Ah well. I think it's s a pity, but you like to write what you like to write. Not your fault it makes me nauseous. As you indicated in your opening note, I'll move on. Plenty of authors without that fetish/fixation. Good luck to you.

Bad story, poorly written.

I agree with the comment below, this subpar entry would fair better in the Fetish category.

Bad story, poorly written.

I agree with the comment below, this subpar entry would fair better in the Fetish category.

Don't listen to those whining Nancys about the fetish category. The story fits into the description of LW perfectly.

Some confusion between the words peak and peek, with peak being used incorrectly. Autocorrect problems or lack of editing???

Otherwise, a great start to a story.

Awesome start, please keep going!

Josh should ante it up a bit and have Kim walk around the house in skimpy swimsuit and maybe invite Toby to have a drink with them at home and have Kim do a strip tease in which it gets Toby aroused and have from there both Kim & Kim get naked and fuck in the living in which Josh will get aroused and DP Kim and start a shared wife relationship where hot experimentation is on the table no holds bar!

So hooot! Im waiting for more!

Great start to a new series! I’ll bet she gets more adventurous with her hubby’s encouragement.

Looking forward to following chapters….

Such a great story! Luv the slow introduction of Toby beginning to take charge; and also Kim's first signs of submission. Very erotic- please continue!

Wife sees a big cock and forgets about everything else, and husband suddenly doesn't mind at all even so he said earlier he didn't want anyone trying something with his wife. There are a lot of stories like this one.

Write something new please.

2starrs

Super HOT!!!! Please, go on soon ;)

Cuck and voyeur tags are redundant.

Best new story on lit! Something to it.. More quick

Great ending to a first great new chapter- so many avenues to pursue! Please continue - Thanks so much!

I bet if there was part 2 she would cheat.

@Anonymous, "both Kim & Kim get naked?"

No such thing as a 2003 Aventador

Good cleanable fun!

So poorly written. The point of view shifts all over the place - who is “I” at any point is not clear. The initial “I” seems to be the husband who doesn’t even get a name until near the end of section 3. Very amateurish and in need of an editor.

@sbrooks103x

RE: @Anonymous, "both Kim & Kim get naked?" - Don't you think anony meant "him and Kim?"

I've seen plenty of typos in your comments.

Yes I Love it . Looking forward to more

Excellent story. Looking forward to more.

Wow! It’s soooo realistic, they have a huuuuge house, a Lamborghini, a Rolls Royce and a Jaguar E-Type and they NEED a tenant ???!!! And a twenty year old tenant has the money to rent! Yeah sure. And the cherry on the crap is, of course, the young dude has a ten feet megalodon cock. LOL

Put the crap in humor.

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