All Comments on 'The Normal Ones Ch. 03'

Nice to see you've returned to this story. I absoloutely loved the first two chapters. They were perfect.

This one? Almost perfect. The inclusion of a second guy always kills these stories for me. It just busts the fantasy. You did seperate those portions, though. So the brussel sprouts go in the disposal without spoiling the mashed potatoes and ribeye, so to speak.

Otherwise its a good addition, just not 5 stars from me this time.

Loved the inclusion of the grandma in the scenario but not sure how Sarah's friend is going to fit in with the incest theme. Five stars and a favorite point!