All Comments on 'The Novelist Pt. 08'

glad to see you are thinking of not sending the family to someone else.

You continue to give your characters life,feelings they are are engaging humans. Well developed story at some point it needs to conclude.

Conclude only adter kids are born amd all is on even keel

There's just one more chapter after this one. I want this to feel like a complete story. I may leave it open for a conitinuation, but the next one should give the sense of completion. Thanks to everyone who has given me feedback. I've enjoyed writing this one. Sorry for the long delay.

You tell a superb story, with interesting and well developed characters. If you don't pursue this story further after the last chapter, I hope we will see other stories from you.

this just keep getting better.... MORE PLEASE SIR!!!!!!!

But, the house seems to be overcrowded and chaotic, my favourite character Alexis is getting pushed more and more into the background, I would like more interaction between her and Tom, surely he could be paying her a bit more attention leading up to the birth of the baby. (thats just my understanding of this chapter after one reading, will read it again later.)

Hey Nicequip, I am one of your fans and have been mesmerised by the whole series. I had been looking forward to this 8th one since a long time ago when I finished the 7th. I just want to know one thing, is there any approximate time period when we can expect that last chapter you told about ? Will we have to wait as long ( or even longer ) as we had to for the 8th chapter (since your earlier ones came out in quick succession)?Just curious and a bit impatient about the waiting. ;-)

But ...

Where do I find a copy of Janis Joplin covering Grace Slick's White Rabbit?

Do not let Tom give away Marie or Jane to Stephen let alone any of his other girls. Have him make a new deal.

I can't wait to see how Jane's training progresses, that's really got me intrigued. It seems like a lot still needs to happen, looking forward to many more chapters to come! I would give this 6 stars if I could.

Brilliant **********'s, but as garyblue remarked,when did Janis cover Grace's song.

Great to see this tale continuing and looking forward to seeing how everything plays out. Tom honoring his deal with Stephen will ruin the character you have built up from chapter one tho.

keep it coming cant wait to read the next one.

Thanks, nicequip, for another excellent installment of your story. It's been a pleasure reading it. You've got plenty of skill at the writing thing—fascinating story lines, full-bodied characters, excellent dialogue, and hot sex (though I wish such scenes were longer). 5 stars, again.

Looking forward to the next piece of the story.

This is such a good story. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat to see what you will come up with next. Keep them rolling!

Great story and it was well worth the wait, looking forward to the next chapter.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it comes soon.

A great story. I hope the next chapter is coming soon.

Thank you to everyone for your patience. Part 9 should be posting any day now. I submitted it three days ago. I hope everyone enjoys it.

I love this series.

But I'm scared. I feel Dad is breaking and it's going to end badly... someone is going to die, I fear. With luck it will be John, but I have a bad feeling it will be Alexis, the baby, or Tom and those are not good options, even John would be a bad option. I guess I'll see.

If you push people too hard they will break and do something stupid. I would have thought that a natural dominant, with the "gift" he has for it would notice someone close to breaking.

Aside from the usual minor grammatical and word usage errors

Petticoats do not have belts nor do they cover the torso

If you ever write again, get ad Editor - Seriously

I get that the dad is the antagonistic plot device providing a challenge for Tom, but...HOW? How can John be STILL thinking about revenge and doing something else. Otherwise, really good addition.