All Comments on 'The OF Girl Ch. 211-220'

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I'm surprised that Katherine didn't decide that she wanted her own scene since her body (not really) was being put out there anyway.

Excellent... Gemma's new 'skill' is a fun theme but maybe she needs to develop her interest with Sabrina.... Also would like to see some more teasing / action at the office - would fit with storyline

Outstanding. Beatifully crafted tale, great charaterisations. I binge read it, couldnt put it down.

Thanks for these! Nicely done, but I have to say the level of reality with the number of perfect orgasms per day is just a little tenuous. In reality, his dick would have dropped off by now through overuse :-).

Looking forward to the Australian trip and the temptations that ensue. When you do that, you can have some fun with the more subtle differences in culture. Don’t forget we drive on the left, we do a lot more deadpan humour, we generally use British spelling (‘arse’), we sit in the front of the taxi when alone, but the sink/toilet flows the same way (that one is a myth). Sport is cricket, Australian Rules Football, and Rugby. Melbourne does food, sport and culture more than Sydney, but Sydney has more expensive property and a better harbour. Etc…

This is currently my favourite story,please try and keep it going,already waiting for the next instalment

Really enjoy this series. Please keep it coming. Impatiently awaiting next chapter

loved this sm!

Is the series over??

This can't be over?

Seriously great series

Are you posting anymore on here, im hooked and need more of this story.

So is this project dead?

so, is he holding this story hostage or something?

I have generally enjoyed this series so far. However i do have some concerns because of later chapters.

First straight women can be part of a threesome and not suddenly be Bi and start looking at other women and wanting to have sex with them. that is a stupid trope and lazy writing. yet we see suddenly Gemma especially appears to be turning to that type of character.

Also the whole suddenly they become girlfriends, as in wanting to have sex together, possibly even without John. while only implied as a possibility so far it is still implied. again poor writing. that just makes the relationships more complicated and more likely to implode/collapse/fail.

So please do not fall in to those traps and ruin the story. keep Gemma and Sabrina as close as best friends/sisters but not romantically or sexually wanting each other except when with John.

Ok have to be honest this one fell off a little sure there was lots of sex but the story seem to die a little, but still a good adventure. what next

I just the humour you inject into this !

Still loving it! Thank you!