All Comments on 'The Old Flame'

The MC parents were 30 y.o old and Jordan had just graduated from high school!!!!!!! So the parents had him when they were 12!!!

He's 18, his parents are 30? That doesn't work chumly. The stories continue to get worse, makes me wonder why

I still check each day. 1*

Are you saying that the parents of Jordan had him at 12 years old if his parents are just 30? That's kinda idiotic to be honest.

Sorry but it is crap.

He is 18 Dad is 30 your maths suck.

This story needs serious help with realism and probably basic math. His parents are both 30 despite him being 18 (one year younger that her 19 years). They’re quite wealthy despite originally becoming parents as 6th graders (club owner, Mercedes grad present). Uncle Elias seems to have a crossdressing side (Uncless Elisa?) and much of the rest (including the sex) seemed like a teenage pipe dream. Sorry, 3* for effort, but there wasn’t much effort put in so that’s being generous.