All Comments on 'The Old House Next Door'

Lots of mistakes in the use of gender and I am sure language differences you should get someone to edit it for you. The telling of the story itself is not very well written or told again an editor is needed.

Gang bangs aren't hot. Neither is the wife running off for good. Hot wives and even breeding can be hot. Think about it, the intimacy, which is sexy, is hot. Rule breaking or unconventional sex is hot. Guys lined up around the block to fuck a woman isn't hot. Neither are strip clubs. If you resist the urge to get really seedy, that's when your stories are the best.