All Comments on 'The Harder They Cum Ep. 01'

Well done! I appreciate and enjoy when a storyteller intelligently weaves in both expressing and explaining power dynamic. Thank you.

PS

Thanks for bringing up fifty and sixty year olds and effect of biological clock.

Love this story! Hoping for more...

Nice premise.

But you need an editor/proofreader. Anna asked for MARGARITAS. Her slave brought MARTINIS.

Other minor errors too.

Training is well described.

Four stars.

Some mistakes, like spelling there was an instance where you called Conner, Sean on the first page. But all in all a good read.