All Comments on 'The Oligarch's Price'

What was this? How pointless of a plot can one imagine? The tags stated there is a wife that was bartered, sold or traded! None of that happened. Sergei basically sent Donald back to his hotel after eating, essentially stealing Lorelei from her husband. Then Sergei sends Donald home empty handed, no iridium contract in one hand or his wife in the other! Lorelei does nothing but acquiesce to Sergei's wants. And ol' Donald gets framed by Sergei resulting in his imprisonment! And the ending? Lorelei comes back to the states, holds a 'beauty contest' to find a new boy toy and everything just kind of runs into a brick wall! At the very LEAST there should have been some kind of transaction wherein Sergei pays off Donald to return home without the contract or Lorelei. Then there would have been a basis for him getting arrested for real crimes of human trafficking and tax evasion. Lorelei would then have a valid reason to hate Donald and have her contest upon her return. I still don't like the premise of Lorelei a gold digger or Sergei an ultrarich thug strong-arming people to take from them because he can. - TANSTAAFL

a stupid proiestute story

Great story.

Why would either of them settle for a used up, middle aged housewife when they could have had incredibly hot college coeds who are tou ger, tighter and better?

And what about her first husband that she set up?

Do you really think that it is possible to reject the President of Russia so easily and with impunity?

Dick all over your face, not iridium!

Vasya from Russia

Our media represent all Russians as cunning and greedy. And, it turns out, they exchange minerals for pussy? Let's send them a huge crowd of our sluts and take all of Siberia. I'm even ready to give up my wife.

And the Russian president let her go? Please! This is stupid!

Complete crap, surely it's time LW had a 0* option, this story would be first in line

Was there supposed to be a story here? If so, you failed. At best it's nothing more than 2 pages of trivial mumbo-jumbo. You had one opportunity to say hello to the Lit audience as a writer. You sure fucked that up.

one star.

That was probably the dumbest story I've read here in the last year! And with all that cuckold crap, that's saying something. But this author proves "dumber always works"

5 Stars

Loved it.

-26thNC Approved

Is Hubby #1 still in jail and she does nothing?

Weird

What a bitch!

Stupid story terrible

God awful. Really really stupid.

A slut pisses off the president of Russia? And takes all of that money out of the country? She's dead within a year.

Well this one certainly lowered the IQ of the whole site.

The story may be dumb, but it's been approved by 26thNCuck. That's says a lot where his mind is. Is that smell coming from the sewer? Maybe we should flush this story down the toilet along with the cucks that approve it.

What a load of garbage

1/5

Years later Donalds lawyers exposed the fraud setup. Donald planned, stalked then disposed of his former bosses. Later he caught up to Laureli in the Caribbean …. He captured then whored her out to as many Caribbean thugs as he could find, dumping her on a dirt road after gaining access to some of her tax haven Caribbean accounts. Guess she shoulda provided testimony to free him

1 Star

Cuck authors are getting desperate.

26thNCuck Disapproved

First story and its absolute garbage.

Try another new name, retread, but it wont help you, just like this one didnt.

0

what a truly fucked up story. 1*

This bitch needs to be kidnapped by the CIA abd her ass dragged to the Super Max facility in Denver...totally incommunicado until she does.

DOL