All Comments on 'The One & Only Time with my Sister'

Liked it, but kind of sad though.

I couldn't get into this story at all, there was no real emotion behind it. It sounded like they just fucked and that was it. Nothing to lead up to what made them get together. I'm glad this was the only time they would get together, since there was nothing there between them to begin with.

I seriously suggest an editor next time, this was just a jumbled mess of a story.

It would be hot if it had more details and emotions behind it rather than just a sparse passion less retelling.

Sounded like a 12-year-old boy wrote this crap, while jacking off thinking about his own little sister. Pure Shit !!!!!

Disregard the critics who think every story has to involve an emotional lead-up and analysis. Your story was short and sweet, a perfect little fantasy.

Was she just stupid? Why still 19 and a senior in high school, when most are either seventeen or eighteen, depending upon where their birthday falls in the year? She must have been, to go into military service, given the misogyny, harassment and even rape so many female service members are subjected to.

No dialog. The sister was faceless, voiceless, anonymous. The whole episode was reduced to just a cumdump, and not in a good way

Well Written and a very nice memory. Some people like fantasy more than reality. Let them have it. Well done.

Well, the comments will certainly teach you a lesson and give you an answer to your ponderance. This story really isn't erotica just a recollection and cathartic trip to dispel your purported guilt. The part you held back is your desire to have taken it further down the rabbit hole. To possess her and use her to your delight further. Serious money says you wacked off many nights to the memory.