All Comments on 'The One Called Mercy Ch. 03'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

And you had to make Rueben weak because he doesn't beat people? Why couldn't you move her along to the next without destroying him? Don't bother with talk of her pleasing the master by being beaten. She just wants the pain. There was no pleasure from pleasing the masters who did not want it. She drove him away.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Am loving the flow of the story

Its been a while since I've really enjoyed a storyline here. Please continue. I'm finding that I do care about Mercy and what happens to her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Still didn't explain why she was with James for 3 years instead of just the one week they had decided at the card game

rothltdoadrothltdoadabout 11 years ago
Hmmm Hi Red

As always enjoy ur stories Mercy didnt chase away anybody. Being a kind and considerate dom is great, i like that but if u dont give a submissive what she needs what her mind/body more than wants actually needs; you will eventually lose her. I like your characters :) hope to see many more. Wonder behind the heavy drapes of english estates how much of this existed then or for that matter now, Always curious.

Jim

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