All Comments on 'The One in a Couple Sex Slave Party'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Reads like an outline

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

So M's companion wasn't his wife? What a dipshit. He got and will get everything he deserves. Most people aren't into sharing this freaky shit. Mistress Allison and dipshit may have just caused his divorce once his wife finds out. I know if my wife found out I went to a freakshow with another woman and came home naked, after I told her went out for a walk, it would definitely be over.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Good idea, but the execution was a letdown. I guess it was intended to read like a news report, but the effect was a dry and emotionless monologue. Pity.

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I am based in Johannesburg, South Africa. I enjoy writing erotica. I am male and heterosexual. The picture resonates with what I think of my stories. Please make comments. Please let.me know what parts turned you on. Please ask for more.....if you want more....and of what....