All Comments on 'The One with the Bad Ending'

Well... That escalated quickly.

Damn. That was kinda/sorta ... different.

And some people do not have the gift. You do not. With all your writing about "not killing the mood", you did a good job of killing it here.

Really? That's it?

There is nothing sexy about this... AT ALL

Sorry, but I won't be looking for a story from you in the future.

A joke. Right?

Because there is nothing remotely sexy in this story. Nothing. Zero. Zip. Zilch.

In fairness to the author, the title warns that it's "The One with the Bad Ending." I guess the readers were hoping for sexy tittilation instead of puking drunk girl. Still, I like the story, because it seems more real and believable when something human and unpleasant occurs. I can understand why many comment-leavers were hoping to be pleasantly entertained and aroused, since that's kind of the purpose of this site for a lot of people. But I like to read about people's real experiences, or about people's fictional experiences that seem realistic. And this one fits the bill.

I'm guessing the writer got all the negative feedback and decided not to write any more stories. Too bad, because I have a feeling they didn't all end with barf in a can. I would love to read more of this author's stuff. Maybe someday the writer will be back?