All Comments on 'The Organization Pt. 03'

Excellent writing 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

I don't know what to make of this. Your type of writing isn't the type I like to read tbh. I'm more into love stories than those based just on sex only. I think you go OTT on certain things but that's just my view. Apart from the hetro sex of the story so far is one thing I didn't like but the whole experience is intriguing. Could the experiment really work in reals? what was in that injection? Sure the whole experience would give the person confidence to lick pussy but would it change the whole outlook on sex? preference?

Apart of me is thinking that Sara and/or her mother are behind the organisation. There's going to be a twist and who would suspect an innocent 18yr old? I already guessed the woman investigator would get roped into the sexual part (tho pretty obvious) so who knows?

I will continue reading this just to see what happens and hopefully it won't be OTT also whose behind it all.

Very exciting, can't wait for the next part!

The development of your story keeps me reading and I am very curious to see what will happen… I personally prefer stories with occasional sex and a lot of suspense and story… rather then a lot of sex scenes with some story around… but I could imagine going forward that there will be more storyline coming… I hope so… nevertheless I like your writing talent