All Comments on 'The Origin of Horny Juice'

Really enjoyed this story! The tie in to the movie Weird Science added some fun for us old timers. I would love to get the back story form slave girl Sumiko.

Nipple orgasms and anal sex! On my. The story was well written, a great mixture of humor and erotica.

Fun story! Really enjoyed it!

Glad you're back writing. A fun story, with lots of nods to nerd coming of age movies.

This was a great story, Smith, very enjoyable. I thought you did a really impressive job of weaving exposition and action into a seamless whole. - Zee

Great addition to the world building of the legal slavery universe intertwined with a fun story.

Great story! On a whim I Googled “Cosmo nipple orgasm” and there are an assortment of articles about nipple orgasms. In one study 29% of the women surveyed claimed to have had one. I’ll second the request for a story on Sumiko. Glad to see you are back.

Welcome back!

Good story!

Great visual at the conclusion of the story with Sumiko in the throes of her climax milking Aaron’s cock with her ass. Now we need the Sumiko origin story.

Well written, descriptive about Horny Juice while linked well with erotic scenes with Angie and Sumiko.

MJ does all this…. They’ve even started researching the affects upon menopausal women :P