All Comments on 'The Other Me Pt. 01'

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Anonymousover 5 years ago

Please

Spare us, don't do a part two.

ReiDeBastos over 5 years ago

Confusing and hard to follow.

I'm guessing that English is NOT your first language. Between the unexplained references to local places, customs, and the poor grammar, it made for a difficult read for me. If you write a Part 2, PLEASE find and make use of an editor, preferably one for whom English is his /her first language.

-Rei

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