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All Comments on 'The Other Me Scares Me'

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 5 years ago

Good start. Hopefully there will be a chapter two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Interesting story line Please continue

DirtyFernieDirtyFernieover 5 years ago

great story so far can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

My only complaint is that that didn't seem like an natural chapter end. Wording it differently would be a bit better. Maybe ending it when the mom said to get to school. Other than that, fucking fanomanal. Loved every second of it

shollingshollingover 3 years ago

Disjointed and unfinished story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Story is only one page, as well as crappy ending.

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I suck at writing. Working hard to improve. I hope I wrote something you enjoyed. What I'm currently working on: Not sure feel free to message me any suggestions.