All Comments on 'The OWLS Club Pt. 19'

Lovely to see this up. Hope whatever the problem was has been sorted. Love Em and Mia, and the scene at the end was tender and red hot - 5🌟💕

It might be just me, Bobbi, but I think this is the best chapter to date. I liked the use of Unchained Melody as a theme for the girls' love. Five stars!

The building and its secrets it holds sound exciting, but watching true LOVE blossom is so beautiful. Well written Bobbi!

Judging by the length of time since the last installment, you are obviously severely pressed for time. All the more surprising, then, that for one who prides herself on her mastery of the Queen's English, your writing is chock-full of errors. Chock-full. Errors in grammar, errors in spelling, errors in punctuation, not to mention garden-variety typos. Hardly a paragraph can withstand inspection. Your work cries out desperately for the handiwork (note: not "handy work") of a good editor.

Thank you Gaius Petronius, constructive criticisms are always welcome. If you are putting up your hand to help with editing, maybe you would could contact me privately. Your help would be much appreciated.

As for the length of time between posts, I strongly recommend you take that up with site managers.

I'm not sure where you got your information from, I don't think I have ever used the phrase 'prides herself on her mastery of the Queen's English'.

I am waiting to find out where the tunnel goes, and what they decide to do about it. I am hoping for the unexpected and exciting.

Great to have the story resume!

And full of passion, too….

Lovely!

Regarding your pride in your mastery of the Queen's English, you begin every installment with "As I use the Queen's English, I will apologise in advance to my American friends for the correct spelling of some words."

I rest my case.

I have edited for selected authors in the past, but only for those whose work I admire.

I have expressed grave reservations about your treatment of BDSM and reached (and expressed) the provisional judgment that Kathleen Ambrose is manipulative and evil. You on that earlier occasion urged me to reserve judgment until I had seen how the story plays out. You haven't won me over yet.

@ GaiusPatronius - Thank you once again for your generous contribution. Your grave concerns have been noted, but that is just your opinion. Thank you for it.

I thought or better, “hear say” , that women are more sedated then men and sex is NOT the important factor about a partnership lol 😂 …. Ok maybe its just the author dream like ideas and totally out of place OR its the truth, girls are sexual maniacs as well as men …. But yeah they are talking, talking, talking and yeah talking and some more talking , the girls …. Back to the important stuff, the tunnel and now? Is this the end

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Some words about @ GaiusPatronius …. Leaving comments is fine but being destructive and pointing a big light onto yourself, about being a great fabulous special extraordinary editor and you haven’t published not even one word yourself WOW Respectable