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tazz317tazz317almost 6 years ago
IF YOU CONTINUE TO CHEAT

sooner or later the worm turns. TK U MLJ LV NV

Sxualchocol8Sxualchocol8almost 6 years ago
I *think* I've got it...

It's not the sons that made "the pact"...well, it IS and it's not...the sons are the flunkies, getting a chance to have incestuious sex, but THEY aren't smart enough to pull this off, without help....excuse me as I go into reverie...hmmm...who else has been gaining (so to speak) from these incidents? Hmmmm....

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchmanalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Next chapter submitted.

The fourth and final chapter of this story is submitted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nice that Don was not so verly praised

I liked the way Don handled the dead bird moment with Carol and was relieved when it was not followed by gushing praise. Of course he gets an award for not competing in the tournament but at least all his fawning sidekicks didn't try to outdo each other with hero worship. That is becoming tiring in this long enjoyable series. Let the guy just be good or great without constantly reminding the reader that he is a superhero to

Everyone but his always soon to be vanquished foes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

The sons are involved. That is a given. They're the rapists. Helga is not involved. Nikki is not involved. The three husbands are not involved. Tiffany is not of age as per Literotica rules and because of that is not involved.

That leaves Kate and Maria.

My conclusion is that Kate or Maria is either the ringleader, or completely innocent and the three sons are the only ones doing the crimes.

Helga *could* be involved, and the "Pact" is actually the pact for Kate, Helga, and Maria, but I doubt it. Alternatively, the "Pact" could be done for reasons other than sex, such as divorcing the husbands, and Helga's cry is there to get the sons arrested, but at the same time, Maria enjoys her time with her son. So that aspect doesn't make sense.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
The Pact

Roddy Hightower and Gary Melton who "have been in trouble with the law in the past: trespassing, one charge of breaking and entering that was reduced to trespassing" are forcing their friends to fuck the female members of their families. Had Tiffany Clarkson been home, these two would have forced their friend Dave to fuck his 16 year old sister who they would have also anally penetrated, but because she was not

home, they just humiliated Dave and his mom, raping her and forcing him to have sex with her.

The sons know who the perps are but don't want to snitch on their two friends, partly because they know those two possibly would snitch how their moms enjoyed the sex they had with their sons. Nikki is angry with her brother and his friends because she also probably recognized their voices as well, and given her reputation for being a skank as it is, tales of her family being incestuous is something she doesn't want to get around at school. Until Helga opening the door to one of the perps to fuck him, and then get fucked by him, she did not realize who fucked her, now she does. The question is will she tell on him, given the fact she was able to fuck her son Sven?

bbarto1900bbarto1900almost 6 years ago
copy cat

i believe the nikki kane and kate is a copycat. nikki getting back at her brother.

probably with different perps.

i believe the clarkson and radcliffe incidents are Marcias doing.

but who caught them? Nikki or Tiffany?

by the way - in order to be better at solving these crimes i am n.ow doing my own whiteboard. dont know that it helps, but we''ll see.

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchmanalmost 6 years agoAuthor
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bbarto1900bbarto1900almost 6 years ago
just 1 more note

and Tom is pissed because he thinks it is his friends doing this. It's not.

RegnzRegnzalmost 6 years ago
Continuation of a great series

I think it’s a pact between the sons, with all the wives/mothers having affairs and the sons found out and by doing this is a way of getting pussy as well as insuring the different sons keep quiet between them selves or something along those lines

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 5 years ago
I did mention "obviously" in my previous comment re.: last chapter...

...and that the college students were behind these crimes;

now I'm not so certain and also perplexed...

could it be the mothers planning from the sidelines?

do some of them despise their husbands enough to see

harm come to them while getting some young buck?

We'll see...

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 years ago

Still think it's a set up by the sons but probably last one went too far. Then Helga opens her mouth and may well be in danger, if not dead.

chytownchytown7 months ago

*****Thanks for the read.

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In an exercise of pure censorship, Literotica published all 5 chapters of my story "Climate Injustice" and then removed them, saying the readers of their explicit sex site(!) want safe spaces from politics(!!) I have published "Climate Injustice" on my Patreon site where the ...

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