All Comments on 'The Party Ch. 01'

I liked the story, and it looks like the Nancy personna is going to continue, but with all due respect dear author, I do believe that Nancy needs a proof reader for her stories, there are a host of small grammatical errors throughout the 5 parts of the 1st chapter; having those corrected will bring you up to 100%. Rock on baby.

I loved the story. So hot and erotic, hope to read many more of your stories.

From the moment Buzz' mom appears, it is completely clear how the story will run. And the main character appears stupid in that he doesn't realize anything... and lets himself be treated like shit - serves him right.

what a great read, exciting and interesting right up to the hottest ending ever, hope there is more to come in this truly hot saga

the sexiest story ever,,ticked all my boxes

This was different than some other CD stories because of the boss who wants the CD but doesn't know she is really a he. looking forward to reading the 2nd chapter.