All Comments on 'The Party Pt. 03'

Pure science fiction. Not very erotic

I’m lost what is happening and why is it happening? Looks like a couple go to a party on Friday, get drugged, and are then placed in sexual situations. Okay I get that and it covers chapters 1 and 2. But why is the time dynamic so broken? Did he and his wife sleep until Saturday night. No food? No exercise? No bodily functions? Then one bathtub scene here I chapter 3 covers all of Saturday and again out go the lights until Sunday night. Why? Do the drugs allow them to sleep until awoken for a new scene? Why were they drugged? Why were the physically augmented? Too many why’s.

Had promise but the constant if failing to deliver on the concept.