by brendachaplin2000
Great story but the time frame of one year for all that was a bit tight. But a lovely story one the less. Yes more please.
I would definitely enjoy more. I think it is a fantastic story, just needs an editor. A lot of spelling issues and some grammar mistakes.
I have rated each chapter a 4 or a 5. It would be all 5s if the spelling errors were fixed.
God I loved this series as well Brenda! Much more sluttier, I think I’m turning into a top fan of yours. Not too mention a lot hornier. Great job hunny! AmiLil!