All Comments on 'The Path to Happiness Pt. 13'

by brendachaplin2000

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LordkalvenLordkalvenalmost 2 years ago

Great chapter. Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story but the time frame of one year for all that was a bit tight. But a lovely story one the less. Yes more please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

More please!!! Loving it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lovely story brought tears to my eyes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I would definitely enjoy more. I think it is a fantastic story, just needs an editor. A lot of spelling issues and some grammar mistakes.

I have rated each chapter a 4 or a 5. It would be all 5s if the spelling errors were fixed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Oh PLEASE continue the story it's so excellent and amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

God I loved this series as well Brenda! Much more sluttier, I think I’m turning into a top fan of yours. Not too mention a lot hornier. Great job hunny! AmiLil!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I need more of this story in my life please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I would love to hear how the story ends

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