All Comments on 'The PAWG Nurse and the Elder BBC Pt. 02'

Never mind improving your English, try coming up with a story that hasn't been done a thousand times.

If you really want to organize well, you could delete all the bullshit about nonexistent BBC and racist plot lines, then it would be a lot shorter.

Loving this story so far. Patiently awaiting more. It give me a glimmer of hope that life as an older guy can still be exciting.

It's nice to see an interracial story involving a nurse and a patient. I'm a nurse myself and have a jungle fever so this story caught my attention. There's some grammatical and spelling errors I noticed but not bad enough to impact the story in any way. Hoping to see Part 3 translated soon.

Thanks for all your comments. This story actually is inspired by what a college friend that worked taking care of elder people told me and somehow it turned me on so much.